2 …

16 Nov

The Hall of the ProphetessTwo days until the release of The Hall of the Prophetess, Book 3 of the series, The Day Magic Died. On Nov. 18, we’ll unveil the book … and a surprise! Here’s hint: The surprise is about Book 1, The House in the Old Wood.

Let’s take a look back.

The first chapter of Book 1, The House in the Old Wood

The first chapter of Book 2, Karia’s Path

Do you have your copies of the first two books yet?

Book 1: The House in the Old Wood

Book 2: Karia’s Path

3 …

15 Nov

The Hall of the ProphetessThree days until the release of The Hall of the Prophetess, Book 3 of the series, The Day Magic Died. On Nov. 18, we’ll unveil the book … and a surprise!

Seems like a good time to recap.

What’s Book 1, The House in the Old Wood, about?

What’s Book 2, Karia’s Path, about?

What’s Book 3, The Hall of the Prophetess, about?

Do you have your copies of the first two books yet?

Book 1: The House in the Old Wood

Book 2: Karia’s Path

Book 3 launch, here we come!

12 Nov

The Hall of the ProphetessLast night I made a few final tweaks to the text of Book 3, The Hall of the Prophetess, and uploaded all the files for the paperback to CreateSpace, the Amazon division that produces print-on-demand paperbacks.

I then went to work on the files for the Kindle version, and I’m still working on them. I hope to have those done within a couple of days.

So sometime today, I’m expecting to hear back from CreateSpace, and if the message is that everything looks good to them, I need to “proof” the book. I’m hoping I’ll be able to do that online tonight.

But what’s all that mean?

It means we’re right on target for that Nov. 18 release of The Hall of the Prophetess.

I’ll keep you updated!

In the meantime, you’d better make sure you’re ready for Book 3:

The House in the Old Wood

Karia’s Path

On course for a Nov. 18 release

5 Nov

The Hall of the ProphetessEvery detail but one is hammered out for Book 3, The Hall of the Prophetess.

And the last step’s a doozy.

My designer, Chris Holland, has completed the cover for the print edition, and I have used that to create the Kindle cover.

There’s no map in The Hall of the Prophetess, so I’m not waiting on an artist.

I have worked through all the issues pointed out by my team of critical readers. Then it was proofread again, and I fixed all of the problems the proofreader found.

Well, I fixed all but one thing. The one thing I must address before I can begin the publishing process.

I have one character who does not speak Teneka well. (A little backstory: She considers the language beneath her.) So as I wrote her dialogue, I took out all contractions and had her use only present tense. Even so, there were a few things she “said” that confused some of my critical readers.

And as Julie read her dialogue, she suggested that it seemed odd that the character could conjugate verbs (as in, she could differentiate between I say and he says) yet could not use tenses.

She’s right.

Ugh. This is a major character, playing a role on almost every page of The Hall of the Prophetess. But I’ve bitten the bullet, and I’m changing how she speaks. Every line.

I’m about one-third of the way through the book so far, and I’ll be working on it again tonight. This also means another read-through by me, and another round of proofreading, before the book is ready. But we’re still on course for a Nov. 18 release.

So you’d better have read the first two books by then, right?

The House in the Old Wood

Karia’s Path

The language of magic, part 6 of lots

29 Oct

Inamali is the language of magic – the language of the Inamali people and their writings, including their spell books. It is the language Karia must master if she is to understand how to destroy magic.

And I thought you may enjoy the books a lot more if you understand a few things about the Inamali language.

Spoiler alert: If you have not read The House in the Old Wood, you will not want to read the rest of this post.

Quick, how many tenses does English have?

A lot of people would reply, “Three.” Past, present and future, right? That’s all most of normally think of, and that seems to cover it all.

Now, grammatically speaking, English has twelve tenses, from past all the way through future perfect progressive, but we don’t need to go there in order to discuss tenses in Inamali.

Karia thinks of Teneka as having three tenses, and at one point feels she has identified seven tenses in Inamali. Seven tenses? How’s that work?

Precision.

Some languages – and Inamali is among them – have multiple past and future tenses, depending on how far in the past or future an event is. In Inamali, it breaks down like this:

  • Legendary past – for something that is said to have taken place in the distant past.
  • Past – a general past tense.
  • Recent past – for something that took place recently.
  • Present – as in English.
  • Near future – for something that is imminent.
  • Future – a general future tense.
  • Prophetic future – for something that is said to be taking place in the distant future.

You might at first think this would be confusing. But think about this. If I say, “I will be going to the store,” you don’t know if I mean I’m leaving in five minutes, or if I mean that eventually, someday, I will be going to the store. Or maybe it’s prophetic – I’m prophesying that I will be going to the store. You can’t tell.

There is no such confusion in Inamali; from the tense itself, you can tell which is which.

This is why, when I was talking in our last installment about the verb infixes lina and lita, I wrote that they are sort of past and future.

Actually, those are general past and general future, and can be used in Inamali as you would use them in English. And that’s another important key distinction of Inamali. Where there is an uncertaintly about whether an event is near future, future or prophetic future, or where an event spans one or more of those, the general future is acceptable.

So in Tsilinakaya, the hope that is being referred to is near future, future and prophetic future.

But in Talitakaya, the event that is being remembered is simply past – it certainly was not recent, but neither was it in the legendary past.

One other thing to understand is that “recent past” and “near future” have more to do with the concepts than with calendars.

What I mean is, if Karia were to declare in Inamali, “I will end Magic,” she would use near future tense. In her mind, this is imminent, whether it actually takes days or years.

Or consider sleeping and eating. She normally sleeps once a day and eats three times a day. So she would likely use recent past tense for sleeping for six or eight hours. But she would be unlikely to use recent past for eating for more than three hours or so.

These tenses are another way Inamali constructs verbs – puts meaning into the actual words – instead of adding words as English does. “I just ate” – three words in English – becomes one word in Inamali, as does, “He will be eating soon.”

So this precision in tenses is another way Inamali eliminates words and loads more meaning into verbs.

Want to see how much Inamali you can pick up? Get your copy of The House in the Old Wood and Karia’s Path.